Visual Pun

This piece was supposed to portray a visual pun. The assignment was to visually portray a word like butterfly orbookworm or in my case, a wisdom tooth. I'm not very impressed with myself with what I created. I feel like it's not quite AP work but to everyone else it's fun to look at and figure out. I would give myself a 3E because I feel like it has the potential to be better than it is but I just really didn't know how to make itbetter.